Your Poetry

Write poems? Please post one (or more!). I'd like to ask that people not judge or critique in their comments here so that the shy might feel cool about sharing something in a warm, friendly atmosphere.

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  • edited February 2021

    20210130 - Let's Dance
    Music describes the people in my life and I dance to the music.

    You've got that constant rhythym and base line, and all the parts of the mix.
    I like it mixed where the base line is carried through an entire set.

    Each piece of music is different and beautiful in its own way. Each carries it message and each brings its own mood.

    Always that constant rhythm.
    Always a new song.
    New beats,
    Fresh ideas.

    Music describes the people in my life and I dance to the music.

    You dear friend are that base line.
    You other dear friend is that groove that locks-in my hips.
    A stranger dances past me. We smiled. We'll not meet again.

    You old friend, once dear. You are the song that drives me from the dance floor. We too, will not meet again.
    You, stranger-friend, "Backie". You're that throwback beat from the 80's. I only hear you once a year.
    All the false starts are samples, that satisfy and fill notes in time.

    You, other dear friend are the interlude.
    Let's Dance

  • [Deleted User]percilla_law (deleted user)

    WARNING: I wrote this when I was dating someone and I was absolutely enthralled with this guy I choose this one in particular because I'm really proud of it (even though the rhyme scheme is kind of off). There is a sexual tone to it but it's nothing too extreme but I still wanted to but a wanted to put a warning to it; there is also some cursing towards the end.

    Why are you so damn
    Sexy
    Who told you, you were allowed to be like this
    The amount of time in a short time
    You have spent for us to be like this
    This,
    A collective pairing of two
    Just so that way we are able to have
    Some form of a title in order for you to be my boo
    This
    The relationship we have never seen our parents have
    Both of our collective fears spiraling because of the past with our mom and dad
    This
    Is just a man taking on a
    charity case
    With the superficial
    small ass waist
    This
    Is one of the sexiest men alive
    Looking at me when I sleep
    And enjoying my company
    Because I make him feel alive
    This is two
    This is you
    This is one fucked up loose ass screw
    This is the question that I just have to ask
    This is definitely going to be my last
    I'm sorry but

    WHY ARE YOU SO DAMN SEXY?

  • [Deleted User]Ennea2HugU (deleted user)
    edited February 2021

    Tea is my little get away in the midst of life, it reminds me to breathe, to take a moment, to be. So I wrote that experience into a poem called,

    The First Sip

    The water in the kettle starts to grumble,
    Tapping at the sides as if to say,
    "Let me out!"
    Steam rushes through the spout, Whistling its urgent tune.
    You free the raging water,
    Pouring it eagerly over the leaves, They release their earthy fragrance.
    Marvel at the tendrils of flavor seeking to fill the cup.
    As it steeps, let stillness seep into your soul.
    Cradle the cozy cup gently in your palms.
    Leave the rim to linger along your lips.
    Exhale your tension, worry and strife.
    Inhale the aroma of grace, joy and gratitude.
    Breathe.
    Take your first taste.
    Let it trip across your tongue.
    Let the tranquility touch your heart
    Permit peace to permeate the rhythm of your life.
    Be.

  • This is NOT my poem, but it is a favorite.

    Morning Song of Senlin

    Conrad Aiken (1889–1973)

    It is morning, Senlin says, and in the morning
    When the light drips through the shutters like the dew,
    I arise, I face the sunrise,
    And do the things my fathers learned to do.
    Stars in the purple dusk above the rooftops 5
    Pale in a saffron mist and seem to die,
    And I myself on a swiftly tilting planet
    Stand before a glass and tie my tie.

    Vine leaves tap my window,
    Dew-drops sing to the garden stones, 10
    The robin chirps in the chinaberry tree
    Repeating three clear tones.

    It is morning. I stand by the mirror
    And tie my tie once more.
    While waves far off in a pale rose twilight 15
    Crash on a white sand shore.
    I stand by a mirror and comb my hair:
    How small and white my face!—
    The green earth tilts through a sphere of air
    And bathes in a flame of space. 20
    There are houses hanging above the stars
    And stars hung under a sea …
    And a sun far off in a shell of silence
    Dapples my walls for me …

    It is morning, Senlin says, and in the morning 25
    Should I not pause in the light to remember God?
    Upright and firm I stand on a star unstable,
    He is immense and lonely as a cloud.
    I will dedicate this moment before my mirror
    To him alone, for him I will comb my hair. 30
    Accept these humble offerings, cloud of silence!
    I will think of you as I descend the stair.

    Vine leaves tap my window,
    The snail-track shines on the stones,
    Dew-drops flash from the chinaberry tree 35
    Repeating two clear tones.

    It is morning, I awake from a bed of silence,
    Shining I rise from the starless waters of sleep.
    The walls are about me still as in the evening,
    I am the same, and the same name still I keep. 40
    The earth revolves with me, yet makes no motion,
    The stars pale silently in a coral sky.
    In a whistling void I stand before my mirror,
    Unconcerned, and tie my tie.

    There are horses neighing on far-off hills 45
    Tossing their long white manes,
    And mountains flash in the rose-white dusk,
    Their shoulders black with rains …
    It is morning. I stand by the mirror
    And surprise my soul once more; 50
    The blue air rushes above my ceiling,
    There are suns beneath my floor …

    … It is morning, Senlin says, I ascend from darkness
    And depart on the winds of space for I know not where,
    My watch is wound, a key is in my pocket, 55
    And the sky is darkened as I descend the stair.
    There are shadows across the windows, clouds in heaven,
    And a god among the stars; and I will go
    Thinking of him as I might think of daybreak
    And humming a tune I know … 60

    Vine-leaves tap at the window,
    Dew-drops sing to the garden stones,
    The robin chirps in the chinaberry tree
    Repeating three clear tones.

  • [Deleted User]DarkLordChungus (deleted user)

    Everyone called it the Ark,
    Because of course they did;
    It contained two thousand souls,
    All kept alive and asleep by machinery
    That pumped them full
    Of liquid food and chemicals.

    It was unknown if anyone on the ship
    Dreamt as it struggled to leave the earth,
    As great metal panels were torn
    From the hull and fire consumed everything.
    Perhaps some envisioned alien worlds
    Brimming with possibility—a fresh start.

  • Thank you dear hearts!!
    Loved reading these.

    Once when my daughter was a toddler, she pointed at the vinegar in the door of the fridge and said, "Dat, mama." I said, "OK," and handed it to her. She took a big swig, made a gnarly-assed face, and then looked at me and said, "More dat."

    @DarkLordChungus
    More dat.

  • [Deleted User]Tazman5307 (deleted user)

    Oh I like this post!

  • I'm swathed in the blue
    Of your eyes
    As vast
    As the summer sky
    And as the luminescent cracks of light
    Leak through
    The folds of midnight
    I hold
    With my closed palms
    The light within

    But I drown inside
    The darkened parts
    Within the purgatory of our hearts
    While waiting on the stars to align
    As the moonlight struggles to shine
    Be it destiny
    Or be it fate
    It was a moment too late

    So I'll take
    The scent of you
    Release the light
    From my palms
    Into the night
    And fly
    Into the cotton candy clouds
    Of the cosmic skies
    Dream of marigolds
    And wish upon the dandelions
    As they fly
    Like birthed butterflies
    Into the crescent moons sky

    In hopes that you
    Are dreaming of us too

  • [Deleted User]Tazman5307 (deleted user)

    It's not in vain


    The kisses given and perhaps lost forever, where they apparently are buried, looking down at that pit where something once existed

    You caress them to the surface that you gave that night, and at dawn his carnal poetry lost its sonata, words where they were born from the core of your being, Where did they go?

    The deep hug that more than hug was the stripping of that armor, your exalted body drinking the rich jelly of love, and you wake up one day your chest withered before its eternal absence.

    The tears of joy, that like a drizzle rejoices feed that land, and be a witness to the growth of the seed put by both, she was tenderly cared for, with that sublime love, and yet she did not become that flower. Say "I love you" because we fell short to create a unique language, neither the heart nor the soul have a voice, only the mystery of a love, but so that expression, like a mist, became vapor; watching without knowing where to go.

    All that was not in vain, because the kisses were born from your deepest layers of your being, your hands traveled a territory never seen, infinitely beautiful, your entire body stripped of all fear and insecurities releasing that heavy shield, and thus you opened your arms and body, enveloping it like the petals of a flower. And if your eyes get wet, it was because of the great sensitivity and recognition before this divine miracle.

    The expression of a word is never alone, but all these things turned on, Its origin many people do not believe it, even without faith, up to an immense fear of showing themselves like this; like being exposed without skin to an unknown world, even the wind hurts, It was not in vain, nor was anything lost because you are still here alive.

    Like a warrior with more scars and a tremendous history, your story and your bravery.

  • I wrote this after my father died. A shorter version is appearing soon in my next book.

    why are people drawn to the ocean?
    my mother asks
    as she pours salt into salt
    sending her teardrops home: burial at sea
     
    i touch her arm:
    latin now for "come"
    an understanding we've wilted into
     
    all other words carry so much,
    the coffins of wet speech,
    weighty with exhaustion.
     
    she turns and walks toward the boardwalk.
    i drive in silence and we're both
    replaying the services for the man who laced our lives together.

    How we sat bone-still,
    listening to a room of lonely people whisper my father into a graveless death.

    We sit with ache, exchange the weight of it in our sleep.
    what would we be without him?
    what will we be
    now?
     
    corporeal, with an arm to touch,
    able to be summoned -
    and all either of us can hold of him now is ashes.

    For lack of action, Our desperate hands clutching his unbodied dust.
     
     and although we rarely speak of how the choice was made,
     
    i know now
    that we don't bury the body for the body,
    but for the digging.

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