What are your favorite bite-size poems (8 lines or less)?

[Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

I've been missing the poetry threads, so I thought I'd go ahead and make a new one :relaxed: This time around, I wanted to see if anyone had favorite poems to share that are on the shorter side (1-8 lines). If you do... share them here!

  1. Which of the following is best?13 votes
    1. Reading poetry to myself
      23.08%
    2. Reading poetry to someone else
      15.38%
    3. Having poetry read to me
        0.00%
    4. Poetry slams
        0.00%
    5. I HATE POETRY
      30.77%
    6. Poetic justice
        7.69%
    7. Posies
        0.00%
    8. Other (explain in comments, pls)
      23.08%

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  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    I'll share a few short ones to start:

    The Sickness Unto Death
    Jerry Newman

    Death's emissary came
    And said, "Why not?"
    I hesitated a fateful second
    -- and was caught.

    a total stranger one black day
    e.e. cummings

    a total stranger one black day
    knocked living the hell out of me

    who found forgiveness hard because
    my(as it happened)self he was

    --but now that fiend and i are such
    immortal friends the other's each

  • [Deleted User]Mmart (deleted user)

    A little more kindness,
    a little less creed,
    A little more giving,
    a little less greed.

  • [Deleted User]creedhands (deleted user)

    I clicked other. I enjoy writing poetry. I don't do it often, and I have nothing currently that fits into this thread (length wise). But I like to write poetry that is has visual emphasis on what it says. (For example, I have a poem that goes from emotional high, to low, to high again that is written in a V shape.) I don't have the technical knowledge to put something like that in a format like this.

  • General Review of the Sex Situation
    By Dorothy Parker

    Woman wants monogamy;
    Man delights in novelty.
    Love is woman's moon and sun;
    Man has other forms of fun.
    Woman lives but in her lord;
    Count to ten, and man is bored.
    With this the gist and sum of it,
    What earthly good can come of it?

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    @Mmart Nice! Thanks for balancing out my darker poems with a more optimistic one :)

    @creedhands Very cool! You're right, though, only 8 lines + forum markdown limitations would be kind of a pain to work with for that style. I like writing poems too, but mine are kinda craptastic so I wouldn't share them here. :sweat_smile:

  • [Deleted User]admirer97_ (deleted user)

    If you ever see a Sasquatch,
    Don’t run! Just watch.

  • [Deleted User]admirer97_ (deleted user)

    A funny bird, the Pelican.
    Who’s beak can hold more,
    than his belly can.

  • Observation
    By Dorothy Parker

    If I don't drive around the park,
    I'm pretty sure to make my mark.
    If I'm in bed each night by ten,
    I may get back my looks again,
    If I abstain from fun and such,
    I'll probably amount to much,
    But I shall stay the way I am,
    Because I do not give a damn.

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    @admirer97_ These are really bloody cute!! I love em.

    You know what, let me just balance out my darker poems with a few more light ones. I feel like I shouldn't have gone into this all doom and gloom.

    Use
    Jerry Newman

    What is the use of use
    when we would be children
    playing for pointless joy?

    I Did Think, Let’s Go About This Slowly
    Mary Oliver (from her elegy to her partner)

    I did think, let’s go about this slowly.
    This is important. This should take
    some really deep thought.
    We should take
    small thoughtful steps.

    But, bless us, we didn’t.

  • In a Station of the Metro
    By Ezra Pound

    The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
    petals on a wet, black bough.

  • Lines on the Antiquity of Microbes
    By Strickland Gillian

    Adam
    Had 'em.

  • [Deleted User]admirer97_ (deleted user)

    The one L lama, he’s a priest.
    The two L llama, he’s a beast.
    And I will bet a pair of silk pajamas,
    There’s no such thing as a three L lllama.

  • [Deleted User]admirer97_ (deleted user)

    Daddy Moses shot the skunk.
    Mama Moses baked the skunk.
    And Holy Moses, how it stunk!

  • [Deleted User]admirer97_ (deleted user)

    Rhymes of a Rolling Stone

    by
    Robert W. Service
    The Sceptic

    My Father Christmas passed away
    When I was barely seven.
    At twenty-one, alack-a-day,
    I lost my hope of heaven.
    Yet not in either lies the curse:
    The hell of it's because
    I don't know which loss hurt the worse --
    My God or Santa Claus.

  • Risk
    By Anais Nin

    And then the day came,
    when the risk
    to remain tight
    in a bud
    was more painful
    than the risk
    it took
    to blossom.

  • [Deleted User]DeadGirlWalking (deleted user)

    I don't see the point in poetry. I don't think I'm clever enough to understand it, and that stops me from being able to enjoy it.

  • @FunCartel You're knocking it out of the park for me.

    All night I could not sleep
    because of the moonlight on my bed.
    I kept on hearing a voice calling:
    Out of Nowhere, Nothing answered "yes."

    ~Zi Ye

    The Madness of Love

    The madness of love
    Is a blessed fate;
    And if we understood this
    We would seek no other:
    It brings into unity
    What was divided,
    And this is the truth:
    Bitterness it makes sweet,
    It makes the stranger a neighbor,
    And what was lowly it raises on high.

    ~Hadewijch of Antwerp

    The morning glory!
    It has taken the well bucket,
    I must ask elsewhere for water.

    ~Chiyo-ni

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    @BuggleBear LOL you're definitely not alone - I see that the "I HATE POETRY" option on the poll is in the lead, at 37.50% :joy: I'm glad I included that one!

  • [Deleted User]C_u_d_d_l_e_r (deleted user)

    Reading it to myself or another, being read to, writing, teaching, so many joys from poetry - I couldn't choose just one.

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    @C_u_d_d_l_e_r Agreed! It's all wonderful. Sorry, for some reason I didn't think of the option "all of the above" :sweat:

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)
    edited April 2021

    @pmvines

    (Spoiler: mildly NSFW, dirty language)

    The roses are wilted
    The violets are dead
    There be d*ck in the sugar
    And also, this thread

  • [Deleted User]Mmart (deleted user)

    @pmvines @squeakytoy You guys crack me up.

  • edited April 2021

    Oh my gosh, one of my favorite topics. Soooooo many by the love of my life, Emily Dickinson. Too many to name here.

    And I picked other because I equally enjoy the first three options on the poll.

  • A timely one by “unknown”

    Spring is sprung, the grass is riz
    I wonder where the boidies is
    They say the boid is on the wing
    But that's absoid, the wing is on the boid!

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    @TheMidnightOwl I love Emily Dickinson! PLS SHARE

    @Mmart Glad we can entertain :joy:

    @CTCuddleGuy I recognize that one. I think I've hoid it before! Thanks, it made me smile.

  • [Deleted User]Mmart (deleted user)

    There was a very cautious man
    Who never laughed or played
    He never risked, he never tried,
    He never sang or prayed.
    And when he one day passed away,
    His insurance was denied,
    For since he never really lived,
    They claimed he never really died.

    Author unknown

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    @Mmart Aw :cry:

  • Crowded Tub

    There are too many kids in this tub
    There are too many elbows to scrub
    I just washed a behind that I'm sure wasn't mine
    There are too many kids in this tub.

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