Amateur poetry

MiniatureGeekMiniatureGeek
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Just sitting here watching the trucks go by.
While the moon slowly crosses the sky.
Listening to the crickets song as the traffic rolls along.

Puttering around this big old house.
Working on this second verse....
With naught but a Yorkie and a little ole mouse.

Haven't written poetry in so many years,
So it's back to the porch to down a few beers.

Just sitting here watching the trucks go by.
While the moon slowly crosses the sky.
Listening to the crickets song as the traffic rolls along.

Comments

  • [Deleted User]checkingthings (deleted user)

    I’m sorry I haven’t a thing to add or share.
    If I mimicked a poet, my words you couldn’t bare.

    Perhaps it is thoughts or only the words I lack,
    I’ll stop right here before I’m no longer welcomed back.

  • [Deleted User]DarkLordChungus (deleted user)

    I wonder what it is about CC that compels people to share their truly abominable poetry.

  • [Deleted User]DarrenWalker (deleted user)

    @DarkLordChungus: Simple.

    When skin meets skin in tender touch, then souls must meet as well (if you don't think that souls exist, already you're in hell). And mangled language is the way sublime souls always speak—clear communication kills the feelings that they seek.

  • pmvinespmvines
    edited May 2021

    Maybe it's all the goths that we apparently have

  • MiniatureGeekMiniatureGeek

    As the sun rises on this chilly morn,
    the smell of cut grass floats gently on the breeze.
    With a doe and her fawn forest bound,
    the cardinals eat seeds on the ground.
    The hummingbird feeder attracts a pair,
    Just glad I haven't seen that big ole bear.

  • CuddleDuncanCuddleDuncan Mod

    Come on @DarkLordChungus, let's have some of your truly abominable poetry!

  • [Deleted User]DarkLordChungus (deleted user)
    edited May 2021

    @CuddleDuncan

    Here you go. I'm sorry.

    A mist covered Lake Hali,
    Obscuring the distant shore
    And the city, Carcosa,
    Where scant few have walked before.

    Across the mirror-like water,
    Above the abyssal deep
    I rowed in utter silence
    Unfocused, as if asleep.

    I was drawn to that city,
    Between Hali and the plains:
    Ancient, fabled Carcosa
    Where the King in Yellow reigns.

    I hate it intensely, mainly because it doesn't scan. Absolute f***ing garbage.

  • MiniatureGeekMiniatureGeek

    He said abominable.
    Try again as that's not half bad. Mine is abominable.

  • UCpaaHVg6u0UCpaaHVg6u0

    Through woods and planted rye
    Trod the lonely berserker, I.
    Whereupon I chanced to meet
    My cuddler, grazing wheat.
    Gunhilde, the Holstein cow
    When eyes met, she did low.
    Now through the Wild Fields I wander,
    Not walking, but upon'd her.
    I'll continue my life of roving
    Not alone, but with my bovine.

  • AstroMysticAstroMystic

    It’s All right
    Crowns breaking, walking & pacing, sprinting As the I split the second is still whole.
    As all fakes...
    lives the Quaking!
    The Quickening!
    The Plot & the Air, both are thickening! Sun is Baking!
    Fires Raging
    Ashes & Smart-Dust to Dust! Mutate we must? Populations commodified. Invisible no need to hide.
    rapid & rabid genocide.
    Crashing waves, Tsunamis ride
    Finally Breaking through all the white wash lies! What’s with this bottomless
    Abyss?
    Who runs this?
    A Devil a deity of my own creation With a polar salvation?
    Clan identification?
    Looking deeply for Sparks of light,
    As we are humbled by an unfoldment of a unique bliss.. Outside perceptual description & negotiation.
    Can we see? This invitation to invention -Dyvyne Inner-vention~ -A refinement of focus & attention?
    Can we spiral upward
    To still “progress”
    While populous is in an avalanche of distress? Stress signals breaking down & tumble
    De-fence D-Cell Charged up & ready so intense! Feel a transference! From form split to the whole. Atma realize it within!
    Prayer pulsating Holy-Chi way beyond Me!
    -Beyond the words & screens we see!
    Outside of all recordable tonality, light spectrum & frequency! Obliviates beliefs & formalities like leaves from their trees. Bowing down & composting the mind upon the bare ground. Now I & I know.
    Center & Flow
    For a moment Slow
    Forget the shallow!
    Dive deep & then even deeper!
    To humbly deliver the blessing thy wish to Reap!
    Feel this presence undeniable in the Shadows.
    
    Darkness of night
    dissolves all solids.
    Build blood & courage down to the marrow.
    Eclipse from an age of Innocent-ignorance now enraged! Break the spell of the obedient slaves.
    Return to the forest & sew the seedlings!
    Fast forward 2020! What do you see?
    Through burning fires, relentless desires & Alien 5G? Internet reigning as all-pervading lord of Data & destiny?
    A-Semi-automated-reality Robocop, firing Nano-guns on social media prey Praying at Tech church- as our digital avatars VR and Play! Voracious velvet vanities for a steel fisted future
    written in code more and more visible everyday.
    Static sluts generate dirty-electricity for this ever-raging Kink for more intimate-twerks on Technologies!
    Need help to assimilate accordingly?
    Your phone is your Dildo, get your WIFI-Gasms
    & cumback again.
    Obediently cling to phone Home for an ET...
    Just looking for a piece of earth to plug your feel into for human connection...
    Are we forgetting our Chi in this rapid rise of external technology.
    Digital mindfulness & drop the fullness breath..a rebirth in a cyborg -as here there is no death.
    Transhuman Dimension & irradiate Assimilate to the frequencies. Drop
    -Power off!
    EARTH
    SUNGAZE
    Freeze still.
    chill in the Core of Primal Ice!
    Split from Karmic vice!
    Living Bio-Photons. Subtle Organizing Electrical Frequencies.
    (IEarth 2.0 downloading Viral complexities,a species living & dying beyond its’ means & needs.)
    In Greed -to feed Alien Creed?
    LOL -HAHA Of course! Yes indeed! Authority deleted!
    Crazy as it all ever seems~
    Wants and desires stimulated, pixelated.
    This world of Trees, nature offline & outdated! Virtual reality selfie stations are ecologically sanctioned and operating!
    B Grade Digital dope get high, Dopamine low,
    ever-seeking & freaking of every glitch in the making! Love it or Hate it, just don’t turn it off or downgrade it!
    Its all around you can’t see it nor evade it! From Rage to Oneness with the Machines we see!
    HAARP CERN Stargate breech & they teach about change! in the godly name of saving the Earth, in the Name of Science, sew skies with metallic haze in this Con-Artists’ craze.
    Trails of Chemicals’ a Blaze. GMOs multiply and the soul of the Soils’ Enraged! Empty genetic husks! degenerates & decaying decoys are all robots’ toys!
    Glazed & Super-Sized from a culture hypnotized.
    Wired, Wireless & not Wild and Wondrous! Virtually Fatal infatuation bred to the undead
    from grave to the cradle growing in every nation...
    Can from the valley of smog & death we crucify. Die & Arise-
    Earth down deep, and drop into the ocean. One drop, enter into its’ wisdom.
    The still e-motion..
    Earth up to the heavenly Lights
    The Inn to rest!
    Emergence I SEE
    Alive Arrive in the inner-Alchemy
    Embodied Died & resurrected!
    Prana rising in the now
    -TAO
    Om TAT SAT
    Don’t ask how!
    Blossoming with the spark of intention found in
    DYVYNE
    INTERvension
    Invention of an opportunity in
    A Krisis
    A Kry is for our Essence, this is
    Krishna All Attractive dancing...
    -Radical Presence
    Christ IS
    Ever fresh
    Ever Pure.
    Picture this & develop a roll to profit beyond all the antagonizing prophets Insight through an age phony lights.
    A resonance of what’s here, what’s to come & reveal & seal the real beyond the fright Relax -hold tight -loosen up -as its’ wild ride!
    it’s what we have left, & its’ all right!

  • [Deleted User]squeakytoy (deleted user)

    Abominable poetry?! I can write that!!

    An amateur sat at a table,
    And wrote poetry as she was able,
    But it was a bad time
    At the end of her rhyme
    She put stress on the wrong syllable

  • [Deleted User]DarkLordChungus (deleted user)

    "Customers"

    The lost have come with wide, red eyes
    And hands outspread as if to plead
    For hope, for joy, to soothe an ache;
    A want to have some kind of need.

  • [Deleted User]malogy (deleted user)

    LOL!!! I am LOVING this “abominable” poetry!!! I used to write abominable poetry back in the day! But alas, twas so long ago!

  • MiniatureGeekMiniatureGeek

    A gentle wind fills the air on this warm sunny day.
    The wildlife pays no heed and allows me to stay.
    These summer days seem to linger at times,
    and at others seems to fly away.

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