A little context: I've been on this site about a month and a half. I live in a metropolitan area. My profile has no photos and only 10 words in my "About Me." I was planning to add more, but as soon as I set up that very basic profile, I started receiving messages. A LOT of messages. I've since met up with one member here, and I responded to him because of the quality of the message he sent me. (It was three sentences and the first one was "Hi, I'm [name]," so don't think I'm about to ask for some huge investment on your part.)
About 95% of the messages I receive look like this:
- Hey how are you doing, are you available this week ?
- Hi gorgeous, good day to you! How have you been doing lately? (remember, I don't have any photos posted, ha)
- Hi, new here?
- how are you? will love to know more and meetup. can you host dear?
Messages like these create a self-perpetuating cycle of frustration and disappointment; women get too many low-quality messages, so they don't respond, and men begin spamming more low-quality messages because when you're not getting replies, it's not worth investing time and energy composing something better. I get it. I'm fine getting a 95% copied-and-pasted message. I scrolled through my inbox over the last couple weeks and noticed some patterns that made me more or less likely to respond to a message, and I thought I'd share them with you (in approximate order of importance). These are personal preferences, and I'm not claiming they're right, fair, or reasonable.
- Message members with compatible preferences: This goes for age range, host/guest ability, and location. If these aren't at least close to compatible, you're unlikely to get a response and you're wasting your own time and the recipient's patience with the site.
- Offer more information than you request: Reading my messages can feel like opening an essay exam. "What's the best thing that happened in your life this week?" "What kind of movies do you like?" "Have you had much luck on this site?" It feels like you're asking me to compose a thoughtful reply and carry the conversation without indicating that you've put any effort in at all. I'm not saying you shouldn't ask questions, but if you do, also offer some information about yourself. Honestly at this point, I know that "how are you?" is a pleasantry, but even that has started to feel like you're asking something of me.
- Don't assume I'm on board to meet you right away; consider my experience and safety: For example, "Looking for someone tonight after 8pm," "let's meet at a club," "can't wait to cuddle you." I'm sure you know that women are taking a very real and serious risk when they meet a stranger from the internet. When you expect to meet same-day or write as if my decisions are a foregone conclusion, it makes me think you haven't put much thought into my experience. This makes me worry that you may not respect my boundaries, I may not feel safe with you, and/or it might just be an unsatisfying experience for me.
- More content than generic pleasantries: "Nice to meet you," "you're gorgeous," "hope you're having a great day." I get it, it's polite, and I completely understand why you wrote it. I'm not criticizing you for writing those things, and I'm not specifically put off by it; I'm just... blind to them at this point. My inbox is A SEA OF PLEASANTRIES with only the tiniest islands of actual meaningful content. The content is what I notice.
- Proper spelling and grammar: Some people don't care about this at all. Personally, I'm happy to overlook one or two errors, and I've probably made a couple in this post. However, excessive typos basically tell me, "I put absolutely no thought or effort into any of this" and that doesn't make me want to have a conversation with you.
All that said, this is basically what I'm hoping for in a first message. It's maybe 4-8 sentences:
Hi, I'm [name]. [Something, anything, lighthearted about you that might be interesting to me. Pets? Hobbies? You're new to the area?] [Why you chose to message me, with some implication that you at least looked at my preferences and think you fit them.] [A brief pleasantry like 'hope to hear from you.' Bonus points if it implies you're local and/or you wrote this somewhat recently, like, 'hope you're out enjoying the sun this weekend'] Attach a PG photo if you don't have one on your profile.
Again, this is all subjective and broad strokes. I'm referencing the stereotypical "men messaging lots of women, women getting lots of messages from men" situation but it's not all explicitly gender-specific -- these are things I keep in mind when messaging women. I'd love to know what patterns others notice in their messages, and what's more universal vs. what's more unique to me. I'm also curious whether anything I've written here seems way off-base, surprising, entitled, out-of-touch, etc; I'm totally open to feedback and new perspectives!